Eleven(alternative ending )

Eleven (alternative ending)

It’s yet another day that I get to wake up next to my lovely wife. She always sleeps in during the weekend so I was first to wake up. She mostly sleeps on her side but on very rare mornings like today she was sleeping on her back. I had drifted a bit away from her while I slept so I moved closer to her. I laid my head on her chest placing my hand on her breast just enjoying the quietness that the morning offered as I breathed in her Jasmine scent.

“What scent do you have on?” I ask as we lay in bed.
The previous night she had invited me into her house after going out for about six months. I was very nervous about it since I wanted everything to be perfect. I had imagined this day for a very long time since I had the biggest crush on her.

“Its Jasmine. Do you like it?” She asks as she climbs on top of me and smiles.

“Yeah. It smells great on you and even better when you have what we had last night.”

“How was it?” She asks as she started kissing my neck

“It was fine,” I replied plainly

“Fine?” She asks pulling away from my neck.

“Yeah. I think you need to do it again so that I know if you are consistent in your performance.” I said as I opened up my hips a bit, wrapped my legs around her waist, and pulled her closer to me.

“Morning,” Ellen says as she wakes up pulling me away from my thoughts.

“Morning my valentine,” I say as I kiss her neck a bit.

“Crap. I forgot valentines.”

“You forgot?” I ask knowing that sometimes she doesn’t even remember what day it is until she checks her phone.

“Yeah am sorry. Give me a few hours and I’ll make it up to you.” She says as she tries to get out of bed.

“No,” I say as I pull her back into bed and get on top of her. “You don’t get to leave me all alone today. I am kinda glad that you forgot. You always pull these amazing great surprises for me and I just want to surprise you back every once in a while.”

“It's not a competition.” She says in her serious voice.

“I know but how am I going to be able to show you that love you?”

“You can get me coffee.” She says smiling.

“And …” I say as I get off her and leave the bed. “You just ruined the moment.” I peck her lips and go to make us coffee.

Moments later as I wait for the coffee to brew I feel Ellen’s arms around my waist.

“Got tired of waiting?” I asked and turned around to face her.

“Nope. I remember you saying that I don’t get to leave you alone today and I figured that you also don’t get to leave me either. She says as she takes a sit on the counter and brings me in between her legs.

“I guess I can agree to that,” I say as I move my hands under the black shirt that she didn’t have while we were in bed. I start rubbing her one of her breasts u and down.

I see El smiling at my actions and leans back a bit to give me better access and say, “Someone seems to be in quite a good mood today.”

“If you had left the shirt off I would be in the best mood,” I said as I pulled my hands out of her shirt and placed them on her thighs since the coffee maker had gone off.

“I’ll remember that next time but now I really need that coffee fix.” “Okay,” I say. “You get your coffee then we will go shopping for a while visit the horses and then I’ll take you out on a date.”

“ Am down with that to-do list but am not riding any horses today. Ed says as she gets of the counter and takes as sit at the table.

“How about a compromise?” I say as I follow her to the table with both coffees’ at hand.

“You can feed and groom the horses while I ride them but you have to ride one with me.”

“That’s not a compromise baby.” She says as she takes a sip of her coffee.

“Of course it is. You won’t be riding a horse alone like the other times.”

“I don’t think so.” She says quietly.

“Come on please. Just one ride together.”

“Portia…” She starts with the tone she uses when she wants to say no to something without hurting my feelings. Upon hearing the tone of her voice I decide to try and convince her one last time. I get off my seat, walk towards her and take a seat on top of her placing one of my hands on her shoulder while my other hand caressed her face.

“Please baby just one ride. I promise you will love it.” I say as I look into her eyes.

“Okay. I’ll do it. First because I love you and because I know it will make you happy also.” She says as she wraps her arms around me.

“Thank you baby.” I say and reward her with a heavy kiss on her lips.

We go out shopping for clothing were I get to buy most clothes while Ed just sits around while I model for her. She tells me which clothes where great and which were not. At one point while I was trying on a swim suit I felt her front up against my back. I hadn’t locked the door as I knew that she was right outside and after trying a couple of them on she gave me a look of desire that I always saw in her whenever she was turned on. We made out for a little while then Ed started to head further down south. I had to let out a throaty moan cause of how good if felt. Just as I let out another moan a knock of the door stopped Ed in her tracks.

“Everything okay in there?”

“Yeah. Everything is fine. Thanks” I respond trying to stay as calm as possible. We hear footsteps leading away from the door and we know the coast is clear.

“I can’t wait to continue this later,” Ed says as she takes a step back away from me.

“I’ll go buy you this while you put your clothes on then we’ll head to the horses and you can finally take me out on that date.” Ed continues as she tags the tag off the swimsuit and goes to pay for it.
We enjoyed a bit of ice cream before we headed to the barn to see the horses. Ed fed and groomed the horses while I rode them.

“Here’s your riding gear,” I say to Ed handing her a pair of boots and a helmet.

“We are going to ride May since she makes you feel at ease.

“Okay.” She says as she changes her Nike shoes for the boots and puts on her helmet. I get up on May and help Ed up. She gets in behind me and wraps her arms around my waist laying her head on my shoulder.

“Ride slow.” She whispers into my ear as if I don’t know she likes a slow pace when it comes to horses.

“Of course baby,” I say as I lead us up the hill so as to be able to see the ranch in full view as the sun sets over it.

“Ellen, baby look up.” I say to her and watch her look up in amazement.

“This is such a beautiful view. I am glad we bought the ranch.” She says as continues to look around.

“Am glad we bought it too. We should head back we got a bit of a drive to where we are going.”

“Am I going to drive?” She asks as we start heading back downhill.

“No. I hired a driver for that and gave the staff and late morning start to work so that you don’t have to get into work early.”

1hr later
“You are taking me to the beach?” Ellen asks once she looked out the window and gets a sense of where we are.

“Yeah. I rented out a beach house for us till tomorrow morning.”

“With a private beach?” She asks and I know what she has in mind since her hand had started to wonder up and under my dress.

“Yeah. With a completely private beach.” I say smiling as I hold her hand preventing it from moving further up.

“You look really beautiful.” She says as she kisses on the lips.

“Thank you. You look beautiful yourself in this suit.” I say as I run my hand on her triceps.

“I still can’t believe that you liked me back enough to go out with me all those years ago.”

“I didn’t just like you. I loved you and I still do love you. Saying yes to you was the easiest and most wonderful choice I have ever made. I say and we kiss making out for a little bit before the driver interrupts us by letting us know we had arrived.

Ed gets out of the car first and holds out her hand for me which I take and lead it to hold my waist once I out of the car. I give the driver the rest of the night off since we won’t be leaving the house till tomorrow.

“Let’s have dinner first then we can take a walk on the beach,” I say as I lead us into a beautiful candle-lit room in the beach house.

We enjoy an amazing dinner prepared by one of the chefs I had hired for the night. We talk about various things we would want in the future as we reminisce on some wonderful past memories.

We head out to the beach and walk for a while in silence before Ed stops walking takes a seat on the beach sand and brings me down with her. I straddle her as she starts placing kisses on my neck and bring her hands on my lower back.

“Are you okay with doing this here? She asks as she lays her back flat on the sand.

“I want to do it here. It will be another perfect memory that you will give me.” I say as I start unbuttoning her shirt.

“Okay.” She says as she sit up a bit and unzips my dress.

I get off her for a bit so that I can get the dress completely off my body. I throw the dress away from where we are a bit and then kneel in front of Ed. I bring my hands onto her waist and unbuckle her belt.

She gets on her elbows and says, “How hot you look when you take my clothes off never gets old to me.”

I smile at her words as I continue to take off her trouser and her boxes completely off.
Once I am done I go back and straddle her hips.

“ I need to get your shirt off,” I say to her.

“Be my guest.”  She says as she smirks at me.

“You need to sit up for that,” I say and she smiles and sits ups for me to take her clothes off. Once her clothes are off I start to place kisses on her neck and then go back to her lips. Before I can even say what I was thinking about how she seems to enjoy me being on top of her she has already turned us around to have me under her.

“El I want to be on top,” I say as I playfully try to get her off me knowing that she will be turned on more.

“Later you will be." She says as she starts going down on my body.

I know I should turn her over now when she is not paying attention but am happy to let her enjoy me for a few minutes. I feel her taking my nipple into her mouth. The wetness and coldness of her tongue arouse me. I know if I wrap a hand behind her head pushing her more into my breast I would lose all control forgetting what I want so I don't. Instead, I turn to the sand over my head gripping it tightly as if it would give me the strength of not to touch her.

"Enough," I say when I feel her start rubbing me over my lace.

"What?" She asks

"I said I want to be on top."

"And I said later." She says and immediately goes back to kissing me. I let her know that if she's distracted she won't be paying attention to pinning me down. Once I feel she has shifted her weight a bit I immediately push her over onto her back and get on top of her.

“Trying to break my back? " She asks smiling up at me.

“ I said I want to be on top. ” I say as I grind myself on her a bit as I hold her hand down besides her head

"You better not try to flip me or you won't be getting this today,"  I say knowing that with her strength she could easily flip me over when she wanted.

"I won’t." She says and I feel her muscles relax.
I move my head closer to her and kiss her lips trying to convey my feelings with just the light touches that my mouth offers.

She wraps her legs around my waist keeping me in place. I move my head down her neck and kiss her just next to her ear knowing that it's one of her sensitive spots. I feel her smile and try to get me to move away from the spot but I keep my hold for a while making sure I left a hickey before leaving.

I move my mouth over her breast feeling her take a deep breath as my tongue latches onto her erect nipple. She brings both her hands on the back of my head pushing more of her breast into my mouth.

When she feels that one breast has gotten enough attention while the other is being ignored she lifts up my head moving it to where she wants it.

She tries to grind herself on but she is unsuccessful when I don't move along with her.

"Portia please." She begs.

“ What do you want me to do?" I ask her stopping my movements.

“ Stop teasing me and go down on me already." She answers trying to get me to move further down her body.

I comply to her need and go down. Placing light kisses on the stomach alternating between both thighs before resting on her sex.

“ Fingers or tongue first?" I ask.

“ Both. I want both." She answers which lets me know how turned on she is.

"Pick one."

"Portia." She says pleading with me to do as she asks.

“Fingers or tongue?" I ask again.

"Tongue. Tongue first."

"Tongue it is." I move up her body and kiss her lips for a few minutes before going down on her.
I move down her body placing light kisses on whichever spot my lips are close to. I position myself well between her legs and put my mouth over her.

It doesn't take long for me to feel her hand behind my head pushing me more into her as her breath becomes short and heavy.

“It pays to listen to me." I say as I replace my tongue with three fingers.

“Shit." I hear her say feeling her body quivering as she comes onto my fingers.

I move back up her body kissing her neck as I wait for her to regain her breath.

“You should take advantage of me more often." She says after a few minutes.

"I would if you let me."

"I'll work more on that." She says as she starts kissing my lips.

“But now ..." She flips us over and pushes my legs open.

"It’s your turn."

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  1. I definitely prefer this version.... most fanfics are about with Ellen in charge... I like when Portia takes the lead....some people esp in leading positions at work like to give up the lead at home ... just saying :)
    Your writing is very good btw ... hopefully we get to read sone more of your magic

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  2. Thank for the comment. Glad you enjoyed it. I am writing with the focus being on original characters so that I can play with their characters as I see fit. I hope you will on enjoy this stories as well.

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